A lifetime of dreams – burned to ash.
The Union soldiers had left nothing but unforgiving flames in their wake.
How cruel to be named Charlotte, meaning “tiny and feminine.” I certainly felt tiny as I watched our beautiful house burn, as my younger brother and I picked up the pieces…alone.
“Look!” Ashton cried, pointing.
There, in the midst of the filthy smoke, stood a single red rose. The entire plantation had burned around it, but this rose held its blazing scarlet head high, daring the world to crush its spirit.
“Charlotte…” he began.
“No,” I said, resolute.
“Call me Rose.”
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This week’s challenge at Friday Fictioneers involved composing a stirring piece of historical fiction out of 100 words and the homely picture above.
Here’s my attempt at it!
Yeh! Me too. Call me rose. 🙂
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Ha! Well okay then… thanks for stopping by, Rose!
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Really descriptive. I could see this.
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Thanks so much… glad you stopped by today!
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A name changer could be a game changer for dear Charl…I mean Rose. Nicely done.
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Thanks… I think this turning point will definitely be a game changer here…
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Love it! Nice nod to Scarlett, too.
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Thanks… and yes, I’m sure we’re not the only ones who heard “Tara’s Theme” playing in the back of our minds during this one!
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Rose would be a more fitting name under those circumstances. Enjoyed your story. 🙂
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Thanks – I think so!
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An elegantly written story.
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Thanks, Liz. Have a good day!
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Loved the ending 🙂
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Thanks, Helen!
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I hope she lived the rest of her life as uncrushed as the rose. Great story about hope in the midst of destruction. 🙂
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I hope so too! And something tells me that she does… thanks for reading!
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Loved the story. 🙂
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Thanks, Vinitha! Have a great day!
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Beautiful. There are some who can never be put down.
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Yes… I aspire to be this type of person! Thanks for stopping by today!
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Great job! I liked the hint of Scarlett. Did you purposely use Charlotte to rhyme with Scarlett? Blessings
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You know, I actually didn’t. I chose Charlotte because it really does mean “tiny and feminine,” and I wanted to use a name change to capture this moment where a young girl grows up and enters the world of adulthood. But the similarity between the names was a happy coincidence!
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It worked out perfectly! And it was a wonderful “coming of age” story 🙂
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I like the layers of meaning in Rose’s name. 🙂
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I think sometimes a name change is necessary to go forth from disasters..
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Yes…it’s a symbol of a fresh new beginning…
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A lovely, descriptive story, John, and the ending was perfect. I liked the meaning of Charlotte’s name and the reasons why she wanted to change it to Rose. 🙂
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Thanks, Millie – have a great weekend!
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Dear Mark,
Nice use of the Rose. She sounds like a tough woman.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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A Charlotte by any other name..oh wait…
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Ha!
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Sad but hopeful story of the wil to overcome and go on, leaving the past behind. Well done, John Mark. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks, as always, for stopping by Suzanne!
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A tragic story, but ending with a lot of hope. Well told.
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Thanks for that, Margaret!
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