For today’s Flash! Friday Challenge, we were given 140-160 words, the picture below, and the royal command to include the concept of arrogance. Happy Friday, everyone!
“New crowns for old ones!” –Benjamin Disraeli presents Queen Victoria the crown of India. Punch, 1876, by cartoonist John Tenniel.
A Royal Wish
I wish to be queen.
The words haunted Catherine as hollow eyes returned her gaze in the mirror. She touched her face, once gaunt with hunger, now haggard from years of heavy responsibility. Slowly, she began to lift the crown to her head.
This should have been my deliverance, she thought, but it has become an insufferable burden.
“You look tired, Your Majesty” a familiar voice hissed behind her. “A bigger crown, perhaps?”
The Arabian accent was unmistakable. Catherine lifted her nose in an effort to hide her terror. “That won’t be necessary.”
He slithered across the room. “You could try again, you know. You’ve one last wish.”
Cold dread struck her heart. “I wish…”
“Yes?” his eyes were bulging in anticipation.
Her voice was regal and wise. “I wish for you to learn the very lessons you’ve taught me.”
He gaped, speechless.
In a whisp of magic, he was wearing the heavy crown.
Catherine smiled. “Long live the King.”
Well done John! I imagine that was a fun one to write to match the pic. Have a great weekend.
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This one actually stumped me at first, but it was fun once I finally hit on an idea!
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Clever ending! Nice job 🙂
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Thanks!
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Great writing, again!
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Thanks – appreciate it!
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Good story and writing. I like the picture..
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Thanks! The picture is given out every Friday at flashfriday.wordpress.com, and they do come up with some fun ones! Maybe you should try your hand at it sometime!
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Thanks so much for thinking of me – your post made me smile today! Have a great weekend!
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You are most welcome…I enjoy reading your posts…and looking forward to learning more about you 🙂
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